以 The Best Day(过去时）为题 英语作文

The best day that I ever had was my 13th birthday.That day,my friends planned a surprise birthday party for me.I was both surprised and happy.We sang and danced.We ate a huge birthday cake.We also played games that were very fun.My best friend gave me the newest album of my favourite singer as a present.I was very happy that day.I felt that I had such wonderful friends.That was the best day of my life.

我是美国高一学生,水平与初二更相近~我英文都快比中文好了

P.S.granparents应该是grandparents

dumplins应该是dumplings

sponsered应该是sponsored

commedy应该是comedy

纠正一下一楼的拼写