英语文章修改（初三水平） 200分

稍微改了一下语法错误，毕竟这是你自己的心意，我不能改里面的内容。

When I’m with you

When I’m with you

I still remember clearly

We sat by the lake

And listened to you sing the song

Beautiful melody and your lively（形容明快，活泼） voice

all make me crazy，I’ll be never forget

When I’m with you

I am thinking of a dazzling girl every second

At the first time we met

Thinking of your big bright eyes

Thinking of your smooth hair

Thinking of your sweety（甜美的） smile

You are so perfect to me

When I’m with you

Whenever,wherever，what to do

You all make me happy, enjoy

And make the lonely go away（使寂寞远去）

We walked at the way of park together

Clear lake, Fresh air

And the bright stars hanging in the sky

We rode a horse together

And Sat closely

I can feel your body temperature

We watch movies together

You had sit next to me

With the weak light

I saw your beautiful face

what a hysterical girl

We ate KFC together

The food is in you lips

So cute

We play-around together

The feeling so cool

When I’m with you

Though I have many shortcomings as well

But I’ll try my best to improve them

Now I have not drop the garbage anywhere

I drop them into the dustbin as you as

When I’m with you

Maybe we’ll never meet after this morning

The last thing you left to me is your sweet smile

And your warm hug

……………

I read the words on the wall

And your card

Star light , star bright

The first star I see tonight

I wish I may ,I wish I might

Have the wish I wish tonight

……………

Seriously

Give you my words now

I will always remember you

I will always keep a warm place in my heart to you

And I promise you we’ll keep in relationgship

I’ll keep this promise（诺言） which I promise to（承诺）

When I’m with you

The days we had is unforgettable

I will always thinking of the days we process

Thanks for giving me so many happy memories

I’ll miss you everyday